Showing posts with label Mo and the Tree of Want. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Mo and the Tree of Want. Show all posts

Saturday, March 8, 2014

#35 - Mo and the Tree of Want - The Story

Since the beginning of this project, I have been very aware of the influence of fairy tales and folk stories in my writing about Bartholomew and his friends.  At times I stick very close to typical formats of folk tales: things come in threes, characters become stereotyped or simplified, there is an emotional aspect to the story that is acted out, and oddities and peculiarities do not have to be explained.  At times I swerve away from these techniques or try to make them more subtle.  In Mo and the Tree of Want I return to blatant fairy tale format.  Mo is a bit slow and dimwitted, unexplained things happen, and Mo is acting out his desires.  AND... there is a moral to the story.  It's not spelled out but fairly obvious.

This incident with Mo also puts in motion events that lead us to the end of The Book of Bartholomew.  Yes, this is story number 34.  There are only 14 more stories after this one.  Mo and the Tree of Want will be published on January 27, 2012.  Here is an excerpt:

Mo peered through one more window and saw Hump-Pug blankly staring back at him. For a moment Mo thought he saw something else in the window, something shiny and gold. It took him a moment to realize it was a reflection. He assumed it was from one of his many rings or necklaces or maybe his gold tooth. But the reflection seemed to be something else. He looked behind him at a gigantic old tree in Bartholomew’s back yard. There in the lower branches was a shiny gold object.

He went to the tree. He grabbed hold of the first branch and pulled himself up. It was dark out and Mo was afraid of heights, but he had to see what this was. It was a rather easy tree to climb with branches at even intervals as far up as he could see in the dark. He only had to climb three or four branches before he was at his destination: a small mesh bag of gold pieces. Mo thought that this was an odd, but fortuitous, placement of a bag of gold pieces. There were eight to ten pieces in the bag, which was heavy for its size. Mo unhooked it from the branch and put it in his pocket. “How lucky I am,” he thought.

He started down the tree but caught a glimpse of something else in the corner of his eye. It was another shiny object much bigger and much further up the tree. “Hmmm,” Mo thought, “that one is much higher. I don’t like heights. I better let it go. But… it is much bigger than this little bag in my pocket. It must be worth much more than this.” Because Mo wanted wealth more than anything else, especially wealth that took little effort, Mo climbed on.

The branches were easy to reach until he was about twenty-five feet off the ground. Suddenly, Mo wasn’t sure how to proceed. He made a few attempts at the higher branches, but, being afraid of falling, didn’t try anything difficult. One branch was almost in his grasp. He could touch it with his fingers, feel the ridges of its bark, but couldn’t quite get a hold of it. In the trunk of the tree was a bump, a canker, that if he put his foot on it, maybe he could reach the branch. But it would mean letting go of the tree with both of his hands. He panicked a moment at the thought and held close to the tree.

“Xavier would think I was such a woos for not trying,” thought Mo. “I can do this. I know I can.” Then with all his adrenalin pumping, he stepped on the canker and swung his arms upward. It worked. His hands grabbed around the branch and then he scampered up. “Well, Mo ain’t no woos after all,” he said to an Xavier who wasn’t there. He rested on the branch for a moment and then continued his ascent.

Mo reached the next object a few minutes later. It hung in a large mesh bag tightly tied to a branch. It was impossible to untie the bag from the branch, so Mo pulled the very heavy gold object out of the bag. It was a vest made of gold chainmail. Mo estimated it weighed about forty pounds. “What the heck?” said Mo as he pondered this object being hung so high in the tree. It looked like it was his size, so he wrapped his legs around the branch and he very carefully tried it on. It was a little small and he almost fell when his elbows were stuck in the arm holes. It was so small, in fact, that once he had it on he couldn’t get it off.

“Crap!” said Mo.

Resigned to wearing the golden vest, Mo began to climb down. He went very slowly, worried about the added weight. “How lucky I am,” he thought as he knew the golden vest would be worth a fortune. Then he caught a glimpse of something out of the corner of his eye. It was something a bit higher up in the tree. From the glimmer of moonlight he could see that it was something encrusted with jewels. He could see green sapphires, red rubies and clear bright diamonds – lots of diamonds. This one object alone would be worth more than all the gold Mo had found thus far.

“Crap,” said Mo.

Wednesday, May 29, 2013

#35 - Mo and the Tree of Want - The Illustrations


"Hello, Meghan?"
"This is Meghan."
"Yeah, Meghan, this is Mark.  Could you do another illustration for The Book of Bartholomew?"
"Oh...," she said with disappointment in her voice.
"No, Meghan, really, I could use your help," I begged.
She hesitated.  I knew I had her.
"What's the story?" she asked reluctantly.
"Mo and the Tree of Want." I continued telling her the story for the next five minutes without interruption.  She then had a series of questions about Mo and about the tree. Eventually, she agreed to illustrate the story, but insisted it would just be a black and white drawing.  "Fine," I said, relieved that the project would get done.  I had gotten behind on my deadlines and was in a free fall. Without her help there was no way I was going to get this story published on time.  For some reason, everyone else had refused.  Maybe it was my caustic disregard for their talents, or the way they had to harass me to get their payments, or the way I would mock their significant others, their wardrobe or their hair.  I didn't have time to think about these things, I needed to complete Bartholomew, NOW!


The above story never really happened.  Meghan eagerly agreed to illustrate another story, as have the other illustrators I am employing to help me finish the last stories in The Book.  Meghan even offered to color the wonderful illustration she created for Mo and the Tree of Want.  But I realized there wasn't another story in The Book of Bartholomew that was illustrated in black and white.  Color, color, color, everywhere else - how depressing.  So, I decided to create the layout for this story in black and white.  With this concept of less being more, I also kept the font simple (trebuchet, 20pt.) and left the ends of the lines of text uneven.  The pages of the story are white with a light grey image behind the text.  The background images are sections taken from Meghan's drawing and then enlarged and lightened.  She did provide a nice border strip for the margins and I used that on the last page, opposite her full illustration.  Simple.  But when you have something as good as a Meghan Hogan illustration, you don't need much else.   

Thanks, Maggie, for the continued partnership! To check out more of Meghan's wonderful illustrations and her hand-made toys, go to: http://2dcloud.com/startled-maggie

Mo and the Tree of Want will be published on Friday, January 27 at The Book of Bartholomew.